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Review Detail of Worn_out_by in Primordial Darkness Heretic Art

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Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv153yrWorn_out_by

This is a pretty accurate review considering the writing it terrible and feels like a copy paste translate and that many of the ratings are fake cause 10 5 stars for something j have a terrible time reading and understanding the most basic of sentences purely cause of miss typing let alone reuse of lazy and many others that define our MC like once or twice a paragraph. Man thiS was more of a rant but still holds true and there are other issues like character development and some other things But its to late for me but anyway the story is something i would not recommend

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Primordial Darkness Heretic Art

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BookWorm69
BookWorm69Lv10BookWorm69

Agree

Tsumihoshi
TsumihoshiLv4Tsumihoshi

I haven't even read the story yet ... but, bro, your review's grammer and writing style is terrible, so I'm not really inclined to believe anything you say. The quality of your review is just freaking trash. If this novel were to have good english, then you probably couldn't even begin to grasp it ... though, I couldn't know, since I haven't read even a single chapter yet.

Riley_Walls
Riley_WallsLv2Riley_Walls

you're the retard here

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Kazu_ma
Kazu_maLv3Kazu_ma

What do you mean "unrealistic?" the story?

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Zackking
ZackkingLv14Zackking

Wtf dude i cant read what your trying to say.

Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15Worn_out_by

This just made me wanna face palm at the logic here cause my grammer is off means my review doesnt mean anything that adds up.

Tsumihoshi:I haven't even read the story yet ... but, bro, your review's grammer and writing style is terrible, so I'm not really inclined to believe anything you say. The quality of your review is just freaking trash. If this novel were to have good english, then you probably couldn't even begin to grasp it ... though, I couldn't know, since I haven't read even a single chapter yet.
Tsumihoshi
TsumihoshiLv4Tsumihoshi

I really don't understand just what it is that is so difficult for you all to understand here. To be blunt, you are commenting on the author's sentence structure, wording, and whatnot, but if you take a look at your own review, you'd realize that you are absolutely not qualified to make any comment about this, seeing that your own sentence structure and "grammar" is more than subpar. I just don't get how you even get the nerve to criticize people while not having any grammatical finesse, whatsoever, yourself. Of course, by now I neither care nor remember the original story's quality, so the points you made clear in your review might hold true either way.

Worn_out_by:This just made me wanna face palm at the logic here cause my grammer is off means my review doesnt mean anything that adds up.
Mustie_4690
Mustie_4690Lv3Mustie_4690

I respect your opinion but you can't really criticize people grammar with that garbage pile of a text.