Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in what happened?

Nice start author! I am impressed by how you narrate things and the dialogues was neat and clean. So far, I haven't seen typos and my reading runs smoothly. This deserves to be in the spotlight in the future. So write more and don't stop! Your readers will be with you. Waiting for your updates. BTW please also review mine called "Waking Up In Undead World". It has a slow start but the juicy part will start in chapter ten. Happy reviewing!