Review Detail of crazydave3226 in My Marvel Reincarnation.

Gotta continue reading author tries to fix it

limits to copying powers... protege: am I a joke to you?

All the problems you listed here are resolved in the later chapter when he gets a reality check.... There's an explanation for it, just keep reading....is what I'd like to say but this novel haven't had a chapter for a long time now, so....[img=exp][img=exp]

As an author myself, I can't stand it when the reader's on this site devalue our work by posting bad review's. You know full well what the MC's main ability is(I won't list it here, as no spoiler filter was used by the reviewer), but you chose too whine about it anyway. Just leave quietly next time or better still, remember that chapters are posted one at a time on this site(By most author's anyway). If you had waited until the next chapter, you would have seen that the author had his own 'justification' for writing it this way.

if you dont want to see bad reviews go to a website that doesn't have reviews he gave solid points and i dont i just type trash and get done with it if you want to whine look at the reviews i post i dont put reasons why i call the works trash because i rather no waste my time and get even more angry but he put the reasons why he didnt want to read anymore so the author could improve

I don't mind negative reviews at all. So long as they make an actual point. Which these failed to do, if we're being honest. 1) Crazydave's concerns are invalid. And so are yours for that matter. 'Whining' about things you see in a chapter without actually waiting to see if the author had a reason for writing it that way,(which is what most of the commenter's here did, btw) is pointless. And you can't even be bothered to list why? That shows a serious lack of patience and a thorough misunderstanding of the creative process. 2)There is a difference between constructive criticism and 'negative criticism'. The first helps, while the later hinders. And in the most severe of cases... it makes authors lose any and all motivation for continuing(which is 'my' point). 3)I would encourage you to try writing your own work. Then when someone decides to sh** all over it for no 'real' reason, maybe you'd understand. But hey, you are entitled to your own opinion, so enough said. -Before I go, a word of advice. If you don't like it when people disagree with you(or disagree with others that hold the same opinion as you), then you might want to check your ego. Otherwise you just come off as childish(no disrespect intended).

he even put what he liked about it, it was not just a comment to bash the story and how it was made

and i dont agree with him

I deleted some of my other comments. I was up for nearly three days straight, and my brain was... well, a little strained. Got a little sleep and then went back and looked at my comments. That last one was a little crazy, so sorry about that. Anyway, your right, crazydave did a great job listing his likes and dislikes in regards to this novel. I am not arguing that he didn't. That having been said, nearly every one of his concerns have been rendered moot, thanks to Chapter 17. In which, the author gave the MC a wake up call, one that I personally loved reading. I believe some of the other commenters mentioned as much. My problem was that he did so in a negative way. It was unnecessarily abrasive, even if that's not what crazydave intended. And that my point, if your reading a fic, then chances are... your not reading a professionals work. Most are unedited and the only feedback we get is from all of you... our readers. If all you do is go, "Oh, well this is trash", or "This novel is sh**", then ask yourself, are you really helping us to improve as writers? Would you like to spend hours writing something only for someone to come along later after all your hard work and completely ignorant as to your future plans and call it, (and I'm quoting crazydave here) "Well-Written Sh**"? ScottyTheD didn't get paid to write this fic. No money came out of anyone's pocket. ScottyTheD 'chose' to do so,(maybe for practice, maybe just to give folks something to read) and I would think the least people could do is list their problems with his work in a constructive manner. That's all I'm going to say about it, now if you'll excuse me... there is a late night/early morning snack with my name on it.

being a new author doesn't mean standards should be lower only that people will forgive mistakes. the key is something like these mistakes may lead to someone's inability to enjoy a story and reviews are rather important. if you have major plot holes or problems in a story it is every persons right to mention them. if the author has allowed them to exist for a long while it isn't the fault of the comentor if the person has failed to address or fix these problems or at least explain them. I am at chapter 13 and have been looking if anyone else has complaints to see if I should stop because it's been getting on my nerves as well. good criticism will hurt because it is blatant truth. that's just how it works you can't get angry at someone if their valid complaint hurts feelings. it's not their job to watch feelings but to read the content and if they want share their feelings on the story. as for people who don't want to waste their time at least they have given their true opinions on the story because that can help an author in the long run. furthermore it is such a cope out to just say that a later explanation fixes something because the complaints about the story are still valid. especially if it is something about a core idea in the story which even if they do have some major change it is still affected by the previous stuff. but regardless I don't hate the story just got some issues with it, ironically becoming overpowered being the least important to me personally. anyway, don't go to reviewers and bash them because regardless of what they are saying they are still donating to the welfare of this cite and these stories by giving their opinion. even if it's not what the author wants to hear. I believe every author should give it a shot and can get better even if it is a terrible story but they need to be told so. and if it runs them away that is sad but it is what it is. anyway I know I am a little late to this party but figured I should share this.

I disagree. 1)Standards are important... when your dealing with professional authors, that is. However, most fan-fic's on this site are written by young writers(Some as young as 10-15) simply looking to improve or, just for fun. If you want professional quality, then you should only read the work of contracted authors. They have whole teams of proofreaders and editors behind them. The rest of us don't. 2)I never said that mistakes shouldn't be pointed out. I only mentioned that readers should be constructive in "how they point them out". I was very clear about that in my previous comments(at least the ones I posted while not exhausted). 3)Third and perhaps most importantly, anyone that relies on a "review" of something to know whether they "may or may not" like it, is missing out. Mainly because most negative reviews are written by impatient people, who only read a few chapters. People like that are the ones I was talking about. You should at least read around twenty chapters before going, "It's not for me"! (That said, you do you.) 4)Unfortunately, I don't believe that this author will update again. He still uses the site, but I noticed that after all the negative, and frankly unhelpful feedback he received, ScottyTheD stopped posting. He claimed "writer's block", but who knows? (I hope I'm wrong, he has potential.)

basically this whole review dumbed down is that criticism is criticism don't try to rationalize them because it's what people think about the story plain and simple. Criticism is generally just negative no ifs and buts about it. If someone thinks the story is bad and that doesn't align with your view of the story it is your place to silently judge them heavily but not write it down in a reply[img=recommend]

dude we wanna read fanfiction it can't be contracted it's illegal to earn money from fanfics so how are we supposed to read professional contracted fanfic writers