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Renata99
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Hello this is my first novel in english. I hope you like my story, and i am sorry if my english is not that good. Buy please enjoy my story. Happy reading.

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My Supermodel Wife (For Sale!)

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suri8184
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Dear Author , its really great novel. But it made perfect if you double check the grammar and spelling properly .

Tintswa72283438
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At the beginning the pronouns were used correctly but in the middle it is very bad. Please try to edit the pronouns and genders from chapter 350 because it is very confusing and it ruins the story line. The story is very good author thank you for the hard work and don't worry about the grammar but please try not to misgender coz it mess up the story line

noranelkasaby24
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then get an editor or re edit the chapter the pronouns are used wrong in the middle of the story at 350 or so it messes up the story and very confusing. not happy ಠ_ಠ

Iybs
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This novel is way too expensive For the quality

Iybs
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But I like it anyway