Review Detail of Theinfamous_ln in The Greatest Scandal of the Century

Author here! Please take your time reading this, I'll be giving an honest review for my work. Okay, as for the writing, forgive me for the grammar and tiny errors, and I'm still improving my writing style (So, I would give this a 4). As for the story development, the plot, and World Background - I've properly laid them out quiet well, as each chapters reveal their lives and struggles that molds and makes out the Main Characters (imma give it a 5) So far in the prologue, it is revealed that this world is divided into 4 regions namely the North, South, East and West Empire. Well, we get some a bit of fantasy/magic involvement here, but I've been trying to portray it as a post-magic world, wherein magic is banned in some areas. And one more Note to take is that, some of you might have read my first book and thought this was a sequel. Well, somewhat it is, But I'm telling you IT'S NOT. And there is no need to read MSE (my first book which is really written in chaos). AND lastly, imma warn you that IM A LAZY WRITER. I have a life to live, I love to work on Damen as well, as much as I would love to improve my writing capabilities and word play. But forgive me if I can't update steadily, I am not a contracted Author (hopefully in the future), but these stories that am writing and the upcoming ones are like a creative momento that I would like to store and share with everyone. These stories are meant to inspire and motivate me as I look back, if ever the time comes for me to (just preparing for mid-life crisis).