Honest to god garbage. The grammar isn't the worst I've ever seen but it's still quite bad. The characters so far have 0 substance. All the does is train and do his stupid ass gatcha. The author clearly tries to make this very comedic but it comes out forced. It's very cringe as well.

not bad at all, tho the mc doesn't seem to be using his abilities properly .................................................................................

Proof of the fact that people are desperate for marvel fanfics. This is literally garbage. From grammar to character interactions this shit look like written by a 12 year old with 0 effort. Talks feels weird and everything is stupid. Mc is so fucking stupid it not even funny.

Yet another Marvel System novel that is utter garbage. This is what the 8 in like 2 months? Looking foward to you dropping this in 20 chapters like all the other authors.

garbage . engrish is terrible. I really have no idea why I am taking time to even post a review for this. I guess to save you time from reading this.

I really like the fanfic i gave low ratings because i want to take a wait and see attitude to see whether you just drop this novel out of the blue i seen several authors do similar with nice fanfics like your so sorry author

TRASH .

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I'm really sorry but I really need to be honest here... You need to improve your grammar, by, like, a ton. I understand that the first chapter was just some "BS nonsense" to start the story, but it does clue us in on how you'll be structuring the story, world, and characters in the following chapters, and from what I read, it's just a constant flow of info that doesn't seem real. The trick is to try and put yourself in the skin of the characters, then you can try to begin to make the story sound like you're living it, and by extension makes us, the readers, feel like we're the MC. The grammar, alone, would already do a LOT of good to the story, but the real bitch is in the rest. It's hard to write, but this is what separates the ones who care from those who just write whatever for no reason. If you read this, I hope you take it well. I'd like to see it get better, because, in itself, the premise is pretty neat. Also, never forget, you can ALWAYS edit already uploaded chapters. So, it's never too late to go back and check if you can improve something, be it grammar, spelling, or otherwise.