Gender Bender and Female leads are pretty big turn offs for me when I'm reading. Tried them just not for me. But to give my honest opinion the story's pretty great especially for a first time writer and one that seems to have a drive to improve further. Even willing to ask for help. Unlike other Gender Benders I've tried the changes are neither ignored nor shoved down your throat. Which is nice. The only problem I've got with it was that the character came off with a Mary Sue like vibe. We hear multiple times about how amazing they are or even worse the numbers of times they are called a genius. We also get a scene with a young master that seemed to end a bit too perfectly and quickly. That and combined with the fact that the God randomly gave more stuff outside of the wishes felt a bit cheap. This is a pretty common issue among newbie authors though it's hard to not shower the Main Character they created with constant love but just like the real world if everything goes right for them all it will do in the end is stunt the characters growth. The problems I mentioned are something that will grow away over time quickly and even quicker for an Author that asks for support and help. So I don't think it's enough to warrant a lowering in rating.
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