Review Detail of Betterdays in I Told The Stars About Us

I saw this novel on the TGIF posts and there was a huge amount of chapters being released, so as a fellow author I thought why not see if there's any good novels? I don't typically read female lead webnovels (I read a lot of them surprisingly on hard cover) but this one isn't too bad. And there is specific reasoning why if you want to dive into it. 1 - It needs some serious grammar checks and some basic help with dialogue formatting but, it's not too abrasive for a natural english speaking reader. Though seriously... might be good to get an editor or proofread your work at the very least aha. 2 - One thing I really liked about the first few chapters I've read is that the author has great descriptive imagery and goes into depth on scenes. It honestly is so fundamental for good authors to make readers feel like they're inside their book. Literally. And this book does a great job of that. 3 - Has incredibly stable updates. The only turn-offs for me are the same ones I have with so many novels on this site including #1 in power rankings, My Vampire System, are the lack of attention and proofreading over the work. The other turn-off is that it's really cliche, it's not bad for some I totally understand that and even I don't mind cliche genres and settings or plots at times. However, sadly this cliche is not my cup of tea. However, shoutout to the author! I think you did pretty well for this considering I think this is a new project for you :)