Review Detail of beloved_writer in Zhoro's Universe:Loose Screws

WOW author, what an amazing introduction 🌸✨!! The first chapter is filled with just the right amount of mystery to keep any reader easily wanting to read more 🤩. And I absolutely love the fact that the author created Auo Ju to be such a smart character. I found his first conversation with Irene to be quite clever and enjoyable! This book is so good! I did notice an accidental shift or two between the past and present tense, but those simple mistakes didn’t at all hinder my reading. Great job author! This is a really good work :)