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The plot is nice and the author did a great job in creating and presenting their plot. One thing I would like to mention is the first chapter you wrote I guess you shouldn't mention what will happen to the character or how they'll die like as you said that the female lead will end up being one of the werewolves so, I guess let readers be in dilemma about what will happen to her at the end that will make readers more curious. But we'll I'm just a reviewer it's upon it's your story so if you think that this is perfect then it is I'm just an adviser. All the best for future you're doing a nice job :)

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W.S : The Hybrid

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