Alright, so we start off with a little background story on how the mom and dad meet and have a baby, the MC. Then the mom dies and the dad is out of the picture. Chapter 2 is an information dump. I think you should make that the first chapter, to avoid any confusion. As for the storyline: The ML feels a bit all over the place. Sometimes he feels like this, other times he doesn't. If the readers are a fan of hybrid/vampire/werewolf stories, you should read this one. Keep up the good work!
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