This story is all over the place. The explanation regarding why the MC chose his powers seems stupid to me. Maybe it will improve. This is just the start. Maybe it's just me being picky. For now this is my rating.

That guy should have had till now a major mental breakout one like karneki ken After all ,he just died of stupidity and also saw people letting him die just because he is normal. Still that guy is trying to show off to another devil. C'mon man that's just too stupid.

I'd like to make some constructive criticism, but there's so much nonsense in this ff that I can't even do that... He died like a fool, he died again like an idiot, and he's still making decisions like a moron... I can't even argue anymore give something to the prompt about how he makes his decisions, but rather to the author for doing all this... His powers were something relatively interesting, but the rest of the ff is mediocre

trash........................................................................................... trash............................trash 🗑️.....

It's actually quite good but considering it still only a few chapters my opinion might change. I do hope that the author has a clear schedule on when to update. AND NO GHOSTING US!!! Good Work Author, I look forward to more updates😎👌

This why novel here dont improve writers dont learn from others mistake Bro who is in a right mind would want to be servant for anyone are you someone with a fetish or something Just considering to want to be a slave or servant to someone make me disgusted to you

[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

😂👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😂👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😂👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😂👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😂👌👌👌👌👌👌😂👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😂👌👌👌👌👌👌

Не слушай этих педиков у тебя ахуеная идея ♥╣[-_-]╠♥♥╣[-_-]╠♥♥╣[-_-]╠♥♡(> ਊ <)♡(´∩｡• ᵕ •｡∩`) (っ˘з(˘⌣˘ )(灬º‿º灬)♡(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(灬º‿º灬)♡(♡ω♡ ) ~♪( ˘ ³˘)♥꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡(~￣³￣)~꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡(~￣³￣)~꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡(~￣³￣)~♡˖꒰ᵕ༚ᵕ⑅꒱(~￣³￣)~꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡(｡・//ε//・｡)(♡ω♡ ) ~♪(♡ω♡ ) ~♪( ˘ ³˘)♥(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤( ◜‿◝ )♡(~￣³￣)~(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡(~￣³￣)~