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Heya. This is my first ever novel so don't expect much. But it'd be nice if you guys could send me some feed back/criticism about your thoughts.

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Reincarnated as an energy lifeform?

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captain_alcohol
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in my case. my idea came from reading and large combination of different fantasy web novels and the idea has been cooking in my head for a long time. I only started writing a year after i came up with the idea when i gathered the motivation. In my opinion, just read a bunch of non-humaniod novels and pick anything you want. Theres no such thing as "original" anymore so dont be scared to rip some ideas here and there. Thats my advice atleast.

Grym_Mabuz:i like the concept... alot. I'm trying to make my own non-human mc novel but my mind draws a blank every time. what give you your ideas?
solo_fanfictioning
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hello

captain_alcohol
captain_alcoholAuthorcaptain_alcohol

Hai

solo_fanfictioning:hello
Ticha
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is very good!!!♥️👍👍

captain_alcohol
captain_alcoholAuthorcaptain_alcohol

thanks :3

Ticha:is very good!!!♥️👍👍
HuTaoBestGirl
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A very nice read, do keep it up!!!

mistermoon
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how often will you be posting chapters

captain_alcohol
captain_alcoholAuthorcaptain_alcohol

its gonna be once a week from now on since life is getting busy again. soz

mistermoon:how often will you be posting chapters
mistermoon
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it's ok you should take your time to relax and make sure your novel is perfect also advice, DO NOT make the mc a beta, don't let him let girls crawl all over him and get away with it by being cute and lovebly, now this is just a request but could you make him a loner and child like, I like how in the castle he was throwing a tantrum and thinking of a glowing ball throwing a tantrum was funny, and NO HUMAN FORM, other wise it would ruin the concept of a monster mc

Grym_Mabuz
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i like the concept... alot. I'm trying to make my own non-human mc novel but my mind draws a blank every time. what give you your ideas?