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Review Detail of JManM in The Lost Heir (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

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The MC has power leveled for most of the story and spent the remainder of his time polishing of the rough edges of the younger cast. His personal goals are as of yet obscure. He has established that he wants to participate in the Tri Wiz for that sweet early emancipation, but beyond that we haven't the foggiest about what he wants out of life. This is a big detractor from his characterization. His interpersonal relationships feel very off because the MC rarely feels anything but annoyance in his interactions with the younger cast unless he is purposefully polishing off their rough edges. He definitely needs a role in this story beyond mentor and power gamer.

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The Lost Heir (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

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