Review Detail of Poison_Tester in The Lost Heir (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Writing Quality- Pretty good, barely any mistakes. Stability of Updates- Pretty stable, right now there are no updates. Story Development- So far pretty good, I've seen some plot holes and cliche's (Is that a word?) but other than that nothing. Character Design- A lot of things are very cliche. Like his wand, his pet, the way his grandfather meets him and acts, and his ideals of getting strong to protect his loved ones??? (how about previous family/loved ones? Did he lose feelings that fast??) but that's ok. But he is kinda a simp sometimes to Cho and Hermione, annoying but ok. World Background- Its Harry Potter. And there are barely any plot holes. So this story gets a 3.4 from me.