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Wow, that was pretty good. I can't wait to read more. Quality: Top notch, felt like a professional novel Stability: I only started just now but it doesn't look like you've gone more than 3 days Story Development: I cant say enough good things here. I just relly want to read what happens next Character Design: Great. I can usually tell who is tallking just by what they say World Background: looks like the story is mostly just in one small space(the arena) but theres a whole world being talked in the background. Even mention a war going on currently