I don't read alot of pokemon fanfic so my standards are probably way off. In conclusion Writing Quality-5/5 By my caveman standard, very ez to read, as far as i can see, i got no issues with the grammar Story Development-4/5 It so far has been a trainin montage. U kno, no gym battle or that stuff. But u kno , mc start as in team rocket so yeah, unique, and so far mc got no interaction with some canon characters(I'm assumin there is a red and a gary/blue for this universe, correct me if im wrong, author) Character Design-4/5 I mean mc is an mc....I cant describe it anyfurther other than a realist even tho he fell in love at first sigh. The pokemon are unique tho, have more character development than the mc so far. Updating Stability-5/5 CONSISTENT World Background-5/5 Its realistic, I mean in this world you can't just sent your 10 year old kid outside to catch monsters and lie to yourself that they are fine and u are a good parent. So if you expect a replica of the anime, well that aint gonna happen. Honestly, cos I played the game I'm more interested to see mc clash with red and also the fact that he is in team rocket.
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