Review Detail of Jay_Mhekzy in Mindfall Paradigm: The War Inside

Your synopsis grips me first, then the prologue which really explains everything to come in the book. Though sci-fi is not my cup of tea but when I see a good story I won't hesitate to dive in. Well done on your plot development, the well-detailed description of your characters and scenes, it really progresses the plots. Also, your grammar is good and the plot moves at a steady pace.