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Im confused is this a translation? But lets just say its not, I think I cant stipulate much with the prologue alone. You're writing is good on WN standards, your opening will leave a cliff hanger to the audience. What else to say, the synopsis has potential, where in the next chapter the guy wakes up and stuff and begins his journey.
Mindfall Paradigm: The War Inside
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Anyway can I ask if the MC develops a personality?, I have seen this trend lately. Please avoid this, where : A soulless MC getting spoon fed by everything, the plot goes to him and he doesnt make decisions by himself, its fine if the MC has a personality, an ideal, a goal or a motivation, but if he has none of that, he is forgettable just ur typical isekai anime protagonist.
REMUS:Thank you for reviewing. It is an original story and today there are more chapters coming, so you can get a clearer impression of the story.
I also know this trend, but you have to keep in mind that the MC just woke up and has little to no knowledge about the world he finds himself in. With the experience he gains about the city and his own background he will pick sides and stand up for his motivations. (no spoilers^^) Realistic character development also means that the MC is not born with a certain attitude or mindset, but needs some time and reasons to develop them. I hope you understand that this can't be done in six chapters, so keep reading and I hope he will satisfy your preferences.
HotRedFlaming:Anyway can I ask if the MC develops a personality?, I have seen this trend lately. Please avoid this, where : A soulless MC getting spoon fed by everything, the plot goes to him and he doesnt make decisions by himself, its fine if the MC has a personality, an ideal, a goal or a motivation, but if he has none of that, he is forgettable just ur typical isekai anime protagonist.
REMUS:I also know this trend, but you have to keep in mind that the MC just woke up and has little to no knowledge about the world he finds himself in. With the experience he gains about the city and his own background he will pick sides and stand up for his motivations. (no spoilers^^) Realistic character development also means that the MC is not born with a certain attitude or mindset, but needs some time and reasons to develop them. I hope you understand that this can't be done in six chapters, so keep reading and I hope he will satisfy your preferences.
REMUS:I also know this trend, but you have to keep in mind that the MC just woke up and has little to no knowledge about the world he finds himself in. With the experience he gains about the city and his own background he will pick sides and stand up for his motivations. (no spoilers^^) Realistic character development also means that the MC is not born with a certain attitude or mindset, but needs some time and reasons to develop them. I hope you understand that this can't be done in six chapters, so keep reading and I hope he will satisfy your preferences.