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Review Detail of Pork in Ace of The Dragon Division

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This author has a talent for ruining his own story, and changing it completly out of no where and adding a crap ton of plot holes and contradictions that arnt hidden at all, he is also good at writing terrible 'heart warming and sad' moments, I ran seriously some of the stuff he pits in this is so retarded, Iran going to the queens birth day and killing people wtf?? lin being married off ?? wdym it was stated he decided to go back to Britain with her if not she would of stayed in huxia, how did it become she went back to get married off the author clearly has no idea what he is writing or just started a new book entirely and then accidently joined the two without reliz8ng it and posted like seriously it is just so dumb and frustrating to read, probably one of the most forced books I have ever read.

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Ace of The Dragon Division

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