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2020-08-26 13:20

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The writing, with the word choices and all its tasteful descriptions, reminds me of that of a **** fiction novel you can find in the library or at a bookstore—in other words, an actual, published book. The quality of the writing is also leaps above a lot of the “edited” stories I’ve encountered on Webnovel. As for the story, I like its pacing and the world-building; it doesn’t linger too much on one particular event or just gloss over important parts, although I did occasionally feel that I would have liked some more time to get to know the characters better. I feel that some parts would have had a more emotional impact on the reader if there had been events to create a stronger attachment to them earlier on. Speaking of characters, they all have flaws that humanize them in some way, and I find that a positive point, but right now (at around chapter 90) I can only really say that I like one character and find the rest somewhat neutral on my likeability scale. After reading further for future developments, I shall see where they each land. Another thing I like is how the foreshadowing was done. There isn’t too much of it, and when something is obviously hinted at, the author still doesn’t give too much away. There’s room for little twists later on so that things don’t go exactly the way you expected them to go. Overall, I like this story, and I would encourage those who are attracted to romance/adventure/fantasy novels to try it out. Just be aware of some of the content (swearing is kept to a minimum, but there is an event related to suicide, for example).

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