Review Detail of PilgrimJagger in X-Rank Hunter
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Ok, for writing quality i give 3 stars because initially the story was a bit rushed and the fact that the main character is able to fight with Rank A beast basically from the start of the story (around 17-30 ch but the story progress slowly so its basically the beginning). Then another fact is that there is a certain battle that lasted more than 10 chapters with the POV of other characters and at a certain point it became just boring, it was too damn long even if i understand what the author tryed to do which was trying to give the POV of the MC which observed the battlefiled from many "angles", it was a nice idea but i think it should be better implemented next time. As for the stability of the updates idk since i'm new to this story and i don't know how often it is updated. As for story development, for now its seems very well written but its a very slow developing story, which is a good thing don't get me wrong but sometimes it got boring. I'm not saying that the story should go faster, god only knows how much i hate many of the half-ass story where the main character basically becomes god in 3 chapters, but there is the need to make something interesting happening while the main event is playing. It's hard to say what but, again, sometimes it gets boring. As for the character design, they are fantastic, very realistic. The MC is very naive sometimes but is not that damn annoying naive character that you can find in many trash novels where the MC is damn too naive or naive in situations where he should not be. As for the world background its seems well built but as far as i am now (58 ch, i'm broke and i can't affor the book) not a lot of information has been given about the world in general but the power system seems fun and refreshing. Overally this story is very good, the author can still improve its narrating style though but considering that this is his first work i can only say well done bro, proud of you, bring glory to all the good writer outta here. Peace.
X-Rank Hunter
Jimar_Jemar
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Man, for the first work you are doing well, i tried to be constructive on my comment because i'm planning to write something too and even in my opinion a good critic its usefull for future development. The plot has "no flaws", it is indeed very good and this is the important thing, what you should improve, at least for what i saw, its just the narrating style. Overally You are doing very well but there is always room for improving. So, keep up with the good stuff and don't overwork yourself. ;)
Jimar_Jemar:i sincerly thank you for the helpful review. this is my first time writing (and i started writing without reading any novel at all) that's why the plot has too many flaws. but don't worry, the later chapters is now focusing to the mc rather than world or other things that makes it boring.
PilgrimJagger:Man, for the first work you are doing well, i tried to be constructive on my comment because i'm planning to write something too and even in my opinion a good critic its usefull for future development. The plot has "no flaws", it is indeed very good and this is the important thing, what you should improve, at least for what i saw, its just the narrating style. Overally You are doing very well but there is always room for improving. So, keep up with the good stuff and don't overwork yourself. ;)