It's like I wanna keep reading since the world that this story is taking place in is interesting and it's got me hyped up but man the grammar is kinda killing it for me. But that's about it, excluding the grammar and overall it's a pretty good story so far from what I've gotten to read.
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LIKEI've continued reading the rest of your story and yeah I gotta say that's the only thing holding you back in my opinion of being one of the top webnovels
Jimar_Jemar:thanks for the review... and sorry for the grammar... gotta fix it soon sigh...
Daoisttyy:I've continued reading the rest of your story and yeah I gotta say that's the only thing holding you back in my opinion of being one of the top webnovels