The idea of this novel is good, I liked the way the story is outlined from the beginning. BUT, the grammar and writing is very poor and very difficult to overlook.For that reason it cannot be rated greater than 3 stars.
Jimar_Jemar
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LIKEI would recommend for the author to reduce or even completely eliminate exclamation marks. they are extremely overused and impact the writing in a negative way. just a thought...
Jimar_Jemar:thanks for the review 🙂 i'ms still working for my grammar 😩
Tea26:I would recommend for the author to reduce or even completely eliminate exclamation marks. they are extremely overused and impact the writing in a negative way. just a thought...