Review Detail of always_tired_ in DC: A Spatial Manipulator
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so I just read through in one sitting and since reviews aren't my thing, imma keep it short. grammar is great. u won't find dumb grammar mistakes here. writing is good. kind of different from the style I'm comfortable but it still flows really well. Mc's personality is good. I'm liking him so far. This book is great and has a lot of potential. Should definitely give it a try 100%. Nothing to lose by that
DC: A Spatial Manipulator
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...srsly? u gonna nitpick about that? no offense but how are fine u on WN? The writer ain't a professional and there are bound to be some minor mistakes somewhere along the line... and by 'dumb grammar mistakes' I mean those where they don't even know which tense to use. Besides, to begin with, the mistake you pointed out, without any context to from where that line is, I can't be sure but 'have had' is grammatically correct according to my limited knowledge.
WoofWoof:'i have had been with them.' there are still errors
