I'm gonna be giving you a good 5 stars for everything except for Updates. The only reason is that considering the stuff you mentioned to us about your circumstances irl leaving you with little time to write. Other than that, the great author of the probable best Marvel fic on this entire site has bestowed upon us the Bible 2 which is this book. Writing Quality- Story wise the book seems rather unexplained but that's just this author's style where he starts the book with a concept and builds upon it whilst dropping hints to a bigger picture which only serves to draw readers in even more. He's also very fluent in English and very capable of writing a gripping narrative that lures readers into it. His grammar's also great, no obvious mistakes and no mind boggling bullshits. Update- Mentioned at the start, his upload schedule seems kind of sporadic from what I've seen so far. Story Development- So far the story hasn't progressed far but has reached what I consider a definitive arc where the MC Blake has started teaching, posed a good moral question and also decided what to do in his criminal-ish life. We're practically at the start of the novel obviously so there's not much to go off but considering author's previous work I doubt the development will disappoint. Character Design- The characters have depth and seem to have relations with the MC that haven't been fully explained yet but mentioned. The characters so far seem to follow their comic counterparts personality-wise rather than their awfully made DCEU counterparts. The dialogue between them is entertaining and just good enough to not be bland. Each character seems to have dimensions, not just the size of their tits but also their persona's have been shown almost fully so that we can grasp a good idea of who's going to behave how and why. World Background- not much World Building yet since it's DC's Earth, the story is obviously an AU so Author has probably made an alternate storyline for each character which he will go in depth with later. [Tl:dr] book good but few chapters:, i.e wait for releases and then binge basically .
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