Review Detail of Melan_Hijack in THE MESSENGER OF DEATH

Item: THE MESSENGER OF DEATH
Rating: 5

Review detail

Melan_HijackLv22yrMelan_Hijack

one strong aspect of this novel would be character development people aren't just mindless things depending on mc another word the world isn't built just for the mc . people act as how we expect from their character feelings are shown strongly the important subject of romance doesn't just happen on first sight and trust doesn't form immediately so this aspect makes the novel reasonable one thing that I have complains about would be the difference between stages of cultivation cause other than getting a bit stronger we don't see any thing , it would have been better if the author had put some work in there for example : in whitch realm could they fly or minor things like a change in color of their core or manifestation of some spirit etc

THE MESSENGER OF DEATH

the_fallen

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the_fallenAuthorthe_fallen

thanks for the review, the stage at which they would be able to rearrange their cells and stuff like that will be included. in fact it is already in it, just haven't gotten to that part of the story. i appreciate your review...🙌🏾

2yr

Melan_HijackLv2Melan_Hijack

allright thx

the_fallen:thanks for the review, the stage at which they would be able to rearrange their cells and stuff like that will be included. in fact it is already in it, just haven't gotten to that part of the story. i appreciate your review...🙌🏾

2yr