Review Detail of the_fallen in THE MESSENGER OF DEATH
Review detail
Yeah, so i had to shamelessly give myself another review but this time i gave myself 5stars. the last review i gave myself had a low rating because i had just started writing and to be honest i didn't have any confidence in my wirting. I know that i can delete it, but my first critic came as a reply under my review, so i am very reluctant in deleting it. Although my confidence has increased, i am still a learner in this aspect. and just to add a little something, a little over-view of MC's character. A lot of people critic it saying that he was described to be apathetic and then later on he started acting like an 11 year old .. yes he was apathetic and he acts childish now, and there is a logical reason for that ( I can't say the reason because i feel like i would be dropping a spoiler.) After coming to the new world he realized something that he never knew. if you want to know what then read the book... Thank you šš... signed: shameless/crazy author...
THE MESSENGER OF DEATH
the_fallen
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No it's not a harem, but that doesn't mean that he wouldn't have relationships with multiple women. Just not at the same timeš
godofwar1:is this harem?
the_fallen:No it's not a harem, but that doesn't mean that he wouldn't have relationships with multiple women. Just not at the same timeš
the_fallen:No it's not a harem, but that doesn't mean that he wouldn't have relationships with multiple women. Just not at the same timeš
the thing with the personality disorder doesn't really attract me to read what can you say about the MC that makes him interesting? other then personality disorder I also found out in the comments that he has a harem kinda with multiple woman and I find that even more uninteresting ( you can spoil pls cuz the synopsis doesn't attract me maybe the start will be good and I don't want to get hooked then miserably disappointed )
No, there is no harem. what makes MC interesting, honestly, are his alternate personalities. and as you've said, it doesn't really attract you, i understand that. if there's any other thing that is unique about my MC or makes him more interesting, are his abilities that puts him above a lot people, although there are restrictions that makes it hard for him to use his abilities to the fullest.
Guan_Yu:the thing with the personality disorder doesn't really attract me to read what can you say about the MC that makes him interesting? other then personality disorder I also found out in the comments that he has a harem kinda with multiple woman and I find that even more uninteresting ( you can spoil pls cuz the synopsis doesn't attract me maybe the start will be good and I don't want to get hooked then miserably disappointed )
the_fallen:No, there is no harem. what makes MC interesting, honestly, are his alternate personalities. and as you've said, it doesn't really attract you, i understand that. if there's any other thing that is unique about my MC or makes him more interesting, are his abilities that puts him above a lot people, although there are restrictions that makes it hard for him to use his abilities to the fullest.
the_fallen:No it's not a harem, but that doesn't mean that he wouldn't have relationships with multiple women. Just not at the same timeš
