Review Detail of MHShiro in THE MESSENGER OF DEATH

Item: THE MESSENGER OF DEATH
Rating: 2.4

Review detail

MHShiroLv43yrMHShiro

Let tell you something in the beginning the Mc was portrayed as the best assassin in the world but in just tow chapters he was like a 7yrs old boy that have a mental illness Author you just f*cked up your novel it has a lot of potential but you ruin it😔😔😕😐

THE MESSENGER OF DEATH

the_fallen

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the_fallenAuthorthe_fallen

Thank you for attempting to read it👍

3yr

MHShiroLv4MHShiro

No it is not that bad if you can edit it and make the Mc looks like a real top assassin and not make the side characters act like a 2D Alright just don't give up and keep try to be better than ever before Peace ✌️❤️✌️✌️

the_fallen:Thank you for attempting to read it👍

3yr

the_fallenAuthorthe_fallen

yeah 😅, i understand... I'm not going to give up that easy...

3yr

newthingsLv6newthings

so its good now?

3yr

StevefpxLv11Stevefpx

true. for an assassin who kills a lot of people, he sure acts like a child. Quite contradictory to what you are portraying. add up to it somehow the dragons say that he has a strong bloodline but all of a sudden they forgot about it. wow are all immortals forgetful?

2yr