Item: My Succubus System
Rating: 2.6
Author: Lord_of_Mysteries

Lord_of_MysteriesLv144yr

2020-12-15 22:24

i can see where the story comes from but if you were to do story like this you could have done anything else than this, the story gets boring overtime and content is really slow and as of 50 chapters there really is only annoying people and the mc seems like an idiot i dont honestly want to continue there are dozens of books that are better than this in every aspect theres books with better stories better charatcters better world, even better writing i dont want to waste time in your run of the mill average and nothing unique fantasy story which has only one thing that makes it unique, every last adventurer other than shop keeper is girl no boys at all but that makes it even more boring for me

My Succubus System

DreamOfRen

4.5

219 Chs

Liked by 4 people

Replies5

Lord_of_MysteriesLv14

also why are everyone in this site so merciful and giving 5 starts for just "oh hey this was good read" ffs that inflates the rating of books and no good reviews for most books

4yr

DreamOfRenAuthor

I'm sorry that you feel you wasted your time. The patrons who help me generate 200$ a month or so for the last 3 months might disagree though. Just because *you* don't like something doesn't mean it's not good. That being said, I 100% encourage you to spend your time reading things you actually enjoy. Trust me, there's no need to announce you're leaving. That's...weird. lol

4yr

Lord_of_MysteriesLv14

i just left my review based on my opinion concerning the story, normally people dont bother writing proper reviews, and thats why i did do so, i wanted to leave a proper review for your story although i feel like it was bit harsh, and everyone likes different stories you always find some novels with some wacko story and they still have large fanbase right now the stories that i enjoy the most is another reincarnation original story on "creative novels" called "substitute hero" . i am not to judge what other like and stuff like that one thing i think is good taht you said in one of the comments to someone who said that he drops that " you dont change the story even if enough people complain which is good authors should just write what they like and then those who like those stories can read it and those who dont can at most just leave a bad review

DreamOfRen:I'm sorry that you feel you wasted your time. The patrons who help me generate 200$ a month or so for the last 3 months might disagree though. Just because *you* don't like something doesn't mean it's not good. That being said, I 100% encourage you to spend your time reading things you actually enjoy. Trust me, there's no need to announce you're leaving. That's...weird. lol

4yr

OtoLv14

Truly the limited scope of an amatuer author. This kind of attitude is what turns people off. Do you think people want your novel to be bad? No. It’s simply disappointment in how you manage to ruin a novel that had a perfectly fine start and then ruin it. Announcing they are leaving is weird? What do you think any sub-4-star review is? It means that the novel is a piece of trash and they aren’t going to continue reading.

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Ocean0GemLv10

Say it louder.

Lord_of_Mysteries:also why are everyone in this site so merciful and giving 5 starts for just "oh hey this was good read" ffs that inflates the rating of books and no good reviews for most books

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