Review Detail of faymousjay in Hero System! Transported to Another World

Item: Hero System! Transported to Another World
Rating: 3.4

Review detail

faymousjayLv33yrfaymousjay

There some errors here and there but im not going to pick at each one. My biggest problem is the author talking way too much during every chapter taking from 1-2 or more pages.which doesnt help when most of chapters are already super short.but good novel over all really enjoy it.

Hero System! Transported to Another World

Ripcorez

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RipcorezAuthorRipcorez

Thank you for the review. I don't understand what you mean by talking too much. I did write some notes, I can agree with that but For the last 20 or even more chapters, It's been on author notes which haven't affected the wordcount of the chapter or made it look longer.

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