Review Detail of CarrotOnTheStick in A Beautiful Nightmare

First, claps for the author for trying her best to have different vocabularies even though sometimes it isn't fit the grammar quite right. Second, the plot was kinda intriguing, so hopefully, that continues. Third, the flow of the storyline is consistent somehow to not be dull. Tips The only thing I can tip is that the grammar. Not the whole grammar. I'm talking about how you would deliver your character conversation. Don't cluster them in the same paragraph, so it'll be not too confusing. You need to be aware that many readers in her use phone, so that was quite a mistake. Final All in all, a good start and keep writing. Hope we have a great day! My thoughts I actually not on FL novel, not because I'm a male, but the novel was still far too on the actual story in my opinion and I hate waiting. So I'll preserve this on my library for a moment and check when it became 20 or 15 chapters.