Review Detail of spicyscribbles in A Beautiful Nightmare

The premise of this story is an interesting one, and those who are interested in this genre should def look into it!! There are some flaws with the grammar, but it is not so bad that it can't be overlooked. I feel like the story's worlds and characters could be developed more, but as the story has just begun I suppose we'll be seeing that in the future. Overall, good work to the author ^u^