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GibberishDude
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I really like the plot! The story is easy to follow, and other than a few missing letters or commas, your vocabulary is quite large. I think something you could work on is not repeating sentences. For example, you ended a few sentences with "she yowled sniffling".

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A Beautiful Nightmare

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Thanks! such a great review! I really appreciate your review and thanks for mentioning my mistakes. I'll keep track with it.πŸ‘Œ