Item: A Beautiful Nightmare
Rating: 5
Author: b3_rt

b3_rtLv14yr

2020-09-06 21:24

i really like the way you write it and describe everything in detail so that the reader like me can really get the emotion and make us think that we are somehow inside the novel. Good job :D

A Beautiful Nightmare

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shaznalye06Author

thank you so much!

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