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Cretius
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I was really liking the story up until chapter 35. At that point with all the clone stuff it just ruined it for me. I kept reading until chapter 39 but I just don’t see a point in continuing since I do not like the story anymore. In my opinion(you are obviously free to have your own) if the author wanted him to be in two places at once, then just create a second body both controlled at the same time since he can already split his thought process. If you wanted him to have a child, than make him have a baby or adopt, either of those would have worked and he is more than old enough that it could easily be slipped in. Even making a clone baby version of himself and raising it would have been fine. Just having a fully matured clone pop up who is their son and acting like everything is normal just feels weird and even if I ignored that, I don’t enjoy the parts that are following “Billy”. Anyways maybe the story gets better or for other people it never had a problem, but I’m just not interested anymore.

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Responsibility or corruption - Marvel

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I am sorry you did not like the clone part, thank you for giving it a try though, although it is too late the clone part got changed not soon after 39 as it seems many readers felt the same as you.