Review Detail of Celelond in Responsibility or corruption - Marvel
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Hi, well I thought I would use this space to explain a bit about my story. It is a slow starter, I have planned out the entire concept so some of the questions you think are plot holes, mention them so I can work with it. I do like to make my reader question things, so a lot of "plot holes" are answered later in the story. On a side note, I have completed up till chapter 25 but am releasing slowly to see the feedback.
Responsibility or corruption - Marvel
Celelond
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I have decided on Steph and Hela so far for David. Billy is Libby, Black widow, and Jean Grey. I will say that these could change at a moments notice as I have randomly changed things I have "decided" on before :x
Shadewind:How many harem members and who are they...?
Celelond:I have decided on Steph and Hela so far for David. Billy is Libby, Black widow, and Jean Grey. I will say that these could change at a moments notice as I have randomly changed things I have "decided" on before :x
You need to read it to understand, you will know who Steph is within the first 3 chapters I think. Hm, you could say 2 MC's although I think Billy is created in Ch 34 only.
Shadewind:Kinda confusing like who is steph . Also is your story contains 2 mc.
Uncle_Sheogorath:Author what is mc in terms of the morality spectrum. For example lawful good, chaotic neutral, lawfully evil etc..
What do you mean by NG and CG? Also I don't want to read a novel where there is 2 MCs specially the other one also has a haremđ and have a lot of screen time.
Celelond:Currently, he is NG. Billy is more CG.
Neutral Good Chaotic Good I think by chapter 49 or 50 you will see the direction the story is headed in terms of the MC and harem. I was answering your question relevant to the chapter you were asking it and my decisions then.
ErjasD:What do you mean by NG and CG? Also I don't want to read a novel where there is 2 MCs specially the other one also has a haremđ and have a lot of screen time.
The short answer is yes. The long one is no, it is the Marvel U but the MC discovers something about it that allows him to bring DCU characters into it.
The4thWAH:So theres Diana and Raven. Are u combining marvelxDc?
Here is my doubt to continue reading the story, overall your story is good but you know some reader prefer to drop the story because of it's story development not to their "liking". Does the second MC " Billy" will ever become stronger than the first MC "David"? something like Billy will ever develop his power to become stronger the MC? because from some of Billy act, i get that he got similiar power with David.
Celelond:You need to read it to understand, you will know who Steph is within the first 3 chapters I think. Hm, you could say 2 MC's although I think Billy is created in Ch 34 only.
Nope, well for two reasons. That was never my intension and because a lot of other readers seem to feel the same, so I ended up changing it.
Edgelord69:Here is my doubt to continue reading the story, overall your story is good but you know some reader prefer to drop the story because of it's story development not to their "liking". Does the second MC " Billy" will ever become stronger than the first MC "David"? something like Billy will ever develop his power to become stronger the MC? because from some of Billy act, i get that he got similiar power with David.
Celelond:Nope, well for two reasons. That was never my intension and because a lot of other readers seem to feel the same, so I ended up changing it.
Hm, Marvel comic/movie verse but the MC discovers something that makes it possible to get DC characters but it is not easy.
Cat_a_strophic:is it mcu or dcu or both mixed?
Celelond:Hi, had a little rough time. I will be back as soon as I can get RL to load properly.