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2020-08-30 14:09

I really like this story, it's definitely worth reading if you've read something like... What's a good example? Like a secret society type of thing, but with super powers? I like it, and the development and progress of the MC is pretty good. The main thing the author could brush up on is grammar and wordplay. Other than that, great job!

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Thank you very much! I will work on my flaws and come back stronger! I am glad you enjoyed it. ^^

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