Review Detail of Hanvaler in Droppedstory

This story has shown great potential, and it might become more popular if the author continues writing with the same quality they have so far. There are very few grammatical mistakes that I've noticed but they do not get in the way of a enjoyable experience, and the plot moves at a nice enjoyable pace. Overall I'd say that the characters have yet to show more of themselves and their personalities, but I believe the author will adress that in future chapters. This story is pretty enjoyable to read and I recommend it to anyone looking for the reborn/system troupe (BL included).