Review Detail of RJMidnight in The Isekai Game: Odin's Eye

I barely read FL because some people tend to make the female weak and all about romance so I am glad you did not make her weak. There are some grammar mistakes and remember that periods and question marks go inside dialogue not outside of it. I like the characters interactions, it is lighthearted and fun. Your story is very insteresting and knows to keep a person reading. Keep up the good work!