Review Detail of Willian_Humildad in Mushoku Tensei Arthur
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It is one of the worst things that I have read, seriously .... the author has a terrible sense of humor, the MC has several personalities, the author says that he is mature ... but he behaves worse than a child ... constant references to anime, the relationship with ludeus ... and his behavior, I will not delve into any of this, I just want you to know that this is bad. the author wants his oc to develop together with the original mc and that is why he makes him stupid, apart from the fact that ludeus is mentioned more than anyone in this story .. it's bad, awful
Mushoku Tensei Arthur
Roxy_Greyrat21
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Hahaha... Well I understand... This is my first fanfic ever written a year ago so the young me must be gung-ho on writing b*llsh*t... The early 30 chapters are written without minding the story will be good or not... I don't really want to rewrite the story since it might not match the latest chapter's development.
Well, I really hope you get better ... and the truth is the only fic of that novel so far .. but you totally screwed up hahaha, the next fic you take out tries to make you a better friend .... and without the jokes please , and without making the mc a secondary character
Roxy_Greyrat21:Hahaha... Well I understand... This is my first fanfic ever written a year ago so the young me must be gung-ho on writing b*llsh*t... The early 30 chapters are written without minding the story will be good or not... I don't really want to rewrite the story since it might not match the latest chapter's development.
Yo i was thinking of reading the manga of this fanfic but i dont want to if it has ntr as i hate it with a passon Author bro can you tell me id it has the dreadful ntr Or not
Roxy_Greyrat21:Hahaha... Well I understand... This is my first fanfic ever written a year ago so the young me must be gung-ho on writing b*llsh*t... The early 30 chapters are written without minding the story will be good or not... I don't really want to rewrite the story since it might not match the latest chapter's development.
CliffkunLolRekt:Yo i was thinking of reading the manga of this fanfic but i dont want to if it has ntr as i hate it with a passon Author bro can you tell me id it has the dreadful ntr Or not
Roxy_Greyrat21:There's no NTR... People misuse that word these days...