Review Detail of ThePrsn in The Kingdom Of The Saiyans

I wrote a kind of pretentious review a year ago, so I thought I'd take the hit and balance my thoughts and scores out right here as suggested by a reader (thanks for the idea 'Kurosis'). I'm fairly confident in most aspects of my story, but they'll always be 4 out of 5 for me, since I think there'll always be room to improve and have more fun with what I'm writing. The updates aren't stable, and I'm sorry about that, they've improved recently, so I'll mark it down as decent, but I really don't know how much I can improve it with my circumstances. The world is the Dragon Ball world... Thanks Toriyama-sensei! Thanks for reading guys, sorry for being pretentious before, I hope ya'll like reading my stuff. Yours Truly, ThePrsn.