This is something so good and interesting. It baited me right from the synopsis as a DB fan as well. Writing - I'll give you a perfect score on this. Excellent prose, great grammar, and the connection between the author and the reader felt real Stability - its new so I hope to see this through Development - nice pace, not too fast, not too slow. Just the right timing and creativity in the first few chapters Characters - I vibe with Reggie. The rest feel alive too. World - A+ for the vividness of it all Keep going.
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LIKEThank you so much! I really love the positive feedback, especially considering how bad my marks are gonna be while I'm invested in writing this. I really hope I can continue to provide a good story with exam season around the corner (I doubt I'll be able to improve my stability score, but I'll try :), and I'll do my best to improve in every aspect of the story as best I can. Thank you so much for reading my novel! I hope you have a wonderful day! Yours Truly, ThePrsn.
ThePrsn:Thank you so much! I really love the positive feedback, especially considering how bad my marks are gonna be while I'm invested in writing this. I really hope I can continue to provide a good story with exam season around the corner (I doubt I'll be able to improve my stability score, but I'll try :), and I'll do my best to improve in every aspect of the story as best I can. Thank you so much for reading my novel! I hope you have a wonderful day! Yours Truly, ThePrsn.