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Review Detail of Ahoosi_Foou in Viscount's Rise

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Ahoosi_Foou
Ahoosi_FoouLv12yrAhoosi_Foou

Your cover really needs ro be changed. the whole entire year i didnt click on your trash cover because i thought it was a trash harem novel with lolis lol. At the beggining of the story its hard to understand the geography and where the countries are when mentioned in the chaps. MC really seems incompetent as hell a fool more like hes relying too much on some annoying guests. I got bored reading this probably would have been better if you just reincarnated the mc or at least something thats hes good at. Your decision to make him normal just made him really boring leading to the story being boring

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Viscount's Rise

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Darkwood
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You said that you thought it would be a trash harem novel with lolis but then want me to add meaningless story features that are typical of trash harem novels with lolis. This is a kingdom building novel, not an isekai.

Ahoosi_Foou
Ahoosi_FoouLv1Ahoosi_Foou

Im sorry have mercy on me will give it a go again

Darkwood:You said that you thought it would be a trash harem novel with lolis but then want me to add meaningless story features that are typical of trash harem novels with lolis. This is a kingdom building novel, not an isekai.