writing quality is good . world background is not good .overall story is not bad .but random undead kill and hero doesn't show any fight .just destruction only .its very annoying
PaiiNz
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LIKEyou took syory from dragon god system novel . I love that novel .but unfortunately author didnt continue .your story seems somtime absurb .no offense
PaiiNz:Yes youre right, we wanted to give him good fights against good enemies so we still wait, but i can say he gets soon a fight :)
Yes i am a really big fan of that novel and i got a little bit inspired by that. No problem everyone got their one opinion :)
Syam_Sundar_7103:you took syory from dragon god system novel . I love that novel .but unfortunately author didnt continue .your story seems somtime absurb .no offense