Review Detail of Eggy_does_writing in Rise of The Banished Azure Sky Prince.

I've read 3 chapters and this story is pretty interesting so far. My favorite part was the world building. The continent seems like a very surreal place imo. I also liked the dynamic between the MC and his grandfather. The fact that they sell medicine and have to travel throughout the land is a great way to introduce the audience to various different characters. The grammar was not the best since I spotted a few errors. I felt like the author said 'Celestial Sky Continent' too much and needs to either abbreviate it or just call it the continent every now and then. The name is fine but it's just annoying when it's mentioned numerous times in the same paragraph. Also, censoring the swear words was very unnecessary and it took me out of the story a few times. If you're worried about getting in trouble for using those then use similar words that are 'safe' (example: darn, heck, gosh) or just don't incorporate those words into your story at all. Overall, this story is pretty interesting so far!