Review Detail of Sabin_Subedi_Fei in Magic and Martial War God

Item: Magic and Martial War God
Rating: 4.2

Review detail

Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor2yrSabin_Subedi_Fei

My story is nowhere near perfect. It can never reach that state. But if you are here for serious character development, weak to strong, romance, hardcore battles, then you have come to the right place. Two volumes have been completed. First Volume- Massive fillers and introductions, no major character development, unexpected pace, and some boring tones. Second Volume- Sect development, character growth, rapid pace, tragedy, romance, some boring chapters, and proper story development. Basically, this novel doesn't have many things that you would like. But if you are looking for a story that has a serious story plot and story development, with lots of ups and downs, then you can join Johnny on his journey to surpass his father so that no one can manipulate him ever again.

Magic and Martial War God

Sabin_Subedi_Fei

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Bernard_NutsuviLv11Bernard_Nutsuvi

So when is the continuation of the Magic Martial War God

2yr

MelshanLv7Melshan

The MC Will have a wife or harém?

2yr

Pukar_GuragainLv1Pukar_Guragain

author nepali ma ni nepali. pahilo xoti maile nepali webnovel reader bhetako.❤️❤️👍👍🔥🔥. Novel aba padxu hai tah mah kasto xa

2yr

ReaperashLv14Reaperash

I think the sentence structure needs some work as it ruin the flow of the chapters. but its seems like a good Novel

2yr

Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthorSabin_Subedi_Fei

After four months. Eternal Faith-Destiny of King. But that story will be rewritten with a new plot and characters

Bernard_Nutsuvi:So when is the continuation of the Magic Martial War God

2yr

Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthorSabin_Subedi_Fei

Single Wife

Melshan:The MC Will have a wife or harém?

2yr

Jhai_alxLv15Jhai_alx

Will you ve continuing fighting for eternity or are you gonna hold out on it so you can have the full story for fei

2yr

Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthorSabin_Subedi_Fei

I will hold the final eternity for Fei. As for other projects, I will try to improve my writing through Yin-Yang Harmony System. So, don't forget to check it out.

Jhai_alx:Will you ve continuing fighting for eternity or are you gonna hold out on it so you can have the full story for fei

2yr

hermanhtLv3hermanht

I think part of the problem this novel has is you trying to put magic and cultivation together They dont realy compliment eachother that Well. I really like your other novel tower ascension though, keep up the good work :)

2yr