Writing is fine and grammar isn’t horrible Idk about updating since I only read 12 chaps Story is ridiculous man is getting op abilities from every anime has no story really. Was the strongest in Naruto before he even went on a mission or did anything really it’s just dumb like what am I gonna read him doing stupid system quests that are easy until meats Lafita which he will sneeze and she’s dead like garbage story
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