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toocareful
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It's a really good Idea and even though Mc is Op it's still okay. It gets pretty dumb around chp 13 I think. Mc pretty much lets Kushina and others die and keeps making the excuse of not wanting to change timeline but at same time completely messing with it. He pretty much took control over black zetsu and obito, takes over uchiha clan, and walks in and kills danzo in front of everyone pretty much making him boss of konoha.

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The Might Of A True Uchiha {Completed}

SomeSpookyGuy

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SomeSpookyGuy
SomeSpookyGuyAuthorSomeSpookyGuy

Bruh ur the one that is stupid. Firstly, you come onto my Fanfic, and without even giving it a shot, you immediately diss it. Secondly, you are criticising me on what you haven’t even tried. I fucking double dare you to write a fanfic. Why haven’t you? Writing a fanfic is harder than reading it, dipshit. All you can do is trash talk. If that is the only thing you can do, then why dont you try? :D

BrabbitX:Are you stupid? Do i really have to spell it out for you... If i didn't know this shit was gonna happen, i would have read this fanfic and then been like "wtf is this shit" and then dropped it and left a 2 star review. because of how stupid that is. now i know even more not to waste my time on anything you write :D
toocareful
toocarefulLv14toocareful

And you shouldnt delete reviews it kinda defeats purpose. Even if they are just hate reviews cuz it still means that they didn't like the story

SomeSpookyGuy
SomeSpookyGuyAuthorSomeSpookyGuy

Sure but I still dont see it ok to literally insult the creators family and story for no reason

toocareful:And you shouldnt delete reviews it kinda defeats purpose. Even if they are just hate reviews cuz it still means that they didn't like the story
SomeSpookyGuy
SomeSpookyGuyAuthorSomeSpookyGuy

(Which some people do), true, there are people who just point out the mistakes, but usually, they follow it up with what I formally said, something like “You shouldn’t of have made it in the first place.” The other day, there was a review “Fuck that shit trial .. .. .hahahahahaha . Your novel is suck. **** that shit ,human! Just save your Fucking excuse for dog shit trial .. .. This is novel world ,all can happen .your Fucking dog shit human. .. .so Just save that Fucking dogshit called trial. .. .and make MC op you mongrel human!!! Mortal! Your novel is Fucking dog shit !!” (Copy and Paste). I dont think I would simply leave it as that.

toocareful:And you shouldnt delete reviews it kinda defeats purpose. Even if they are just hate reviews cuz it still means that they didn't like the story
toocareful
toocarefulLv14toocareful

Well whatever. When people put stuff out, there is always going to be a difference in opinion and sometimes you just have to expect them to be harsh and roll with the punches.

DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10DarthVegito

Yeah that doesnt make much sense to let people die for the timeline even though you already changed it. Thanks for the heads up

DiperZ
DiperZLv3DiperZ

Novela de mierda

BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

lol. Doesn't want to change timeline by saving the best characters, but still does all that shit? Not even gonna bother with this fanfic. what a joke.

SomeSpookyGuy:(Which some people do), true, there are people who just point out the mistakes, but usually, they follow it up with what I formally said, something like “You shouldn’t of have made it in the first place.” The other day, there was a review “Fuck that shit trial .. .. .hahahahahaha . Your novel is suck. **** that shit ,human! Just save your Fucking excuse for dog shit trial .. .. This is novel world ,all can happen .your Fucking dog shit human. .. .so Just save that Fucking dogshit called trial. .. .and make MC op you mongrel human!!! Mortal! Your novel is Fucking dog shit !!” (Copy and Paste). I dont think I would simply leave it as that.
SomeSpookyGuy
SomeSpookyGuyAuthorSomeSpookyGuy

Good for you

BrabbitX:lol. Doesn't want to change timeline by saving the best characters, but still does all that shit? Not even gonna bother with this fanfic. what a joke.
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

nah, it's good for both of us. I don't have to waste my time and you don't get another 2 star review.

SomeSpookyGuy:Good for you
SomeSpookyGuy
SomeSpookyGuyAuthorSomeSpookyGuy

Why should I care if I get a 2 star review? If you dont even read it, then it doesn’t even count as a review. I would have just deleted it even if you did. Plus, since when are they dead for the whole story?

BrabbitX:nah, it's good for both of us. I don't have to waste my time and you don't get another 2 star review.
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

Are you stupid? Do i really have to spell it out for you... If i didn't know this shit was gonna happen, i would have read this fanfic and then been like "wtf is this shit" and then dropped it and left a 2 star review. because of how stupid that is. now i know even more not to waste my time on anything you write :D

SomeSpookyGuy:Why should I care if I get a 2 star review? If you dont even read it, then it doesn’t even count as a review. I would have just deleted it even if you did. Plus, since when are they dead for the whole story?
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

What a moron. First of all, i dissed the thing that was pointed out by the reviewer (that's what reviews are for, you absolute dipshit). 2nd of all you completely ignored the fact that you are an idiot and didn't understand what i meant the first time. 3rdly and lastly, never said it was easy to write a fanfic. Also you are a fucking dipshit moron. The logic of "if you don't like it, make something better" is so fucking retarded. Have you ever critiqued a movie? If yes, then make a better one. Have you ever hated a song? If yes, go make a better one. THAT logic is completely stupid. Just because you can't make something better, doesn't mean you can't criticise it. see see,? seE? This is why you are an idiot.

SomeSpookyGuy:Bruh ur the one that is stupid. Firstly, you come onto my Fanfic, and without even giving it a shot, you immediately diss it. Secondly, you are criticising me on what you haven’t even tried. I fucking double dare you to write a fanfic. Why haven’t you? Writing a fanfic is harder than reading it, dipshit. All you can do is trash talk. If that is the only thing you can do, then why dont you try? :D
SomeSpookyGuy
SomeSpookyGuyAuthorSomeSpookyGuy

?? Bruh u r still not getting my point. Why trash talk in the first place? What benefit does it provide you? Sure, ur logic of the movies and songs is correct, but is it still proper to directly insult the creator? If u do think it is “necessary”, then why should you publicise it? Haven’t u heard of the saying “keep it to your self?” And y are u so mad? U started this, shouldn’t you be “calm and collective?” lol I really can’t understand people like you. I wont answer even if u sent another dumb reply. Goodbye idiot

BrabbitX:What a moron. First of all, i dissed the thing that was pointed out by the reviewer (that's what reviews are for, you absolute dipshit). 2nd of all you completely ignored the fact that you are an idiot and didn't understand what i meant the first time. 3rdly and lastly, never said it was easy to write a fanfic. Also you are a fucking dipshit moron. The logic of "if you don't like it, make something better" is so fucking retarded. Have you ever critiqued a movie? If yes, then make a better one. Have you ever hated a song? If yes, go make a better one. THAT logic is completely stupid. Just because you can't make something better, doesn't mean you can't criticise it. see see,? seE? This is why you are an idiot.
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

i called you an idiot for not understand what i meant when i said thats its good for both of us after you replied to my comment with the "good for you" You are making it sound as if I insulted you because of what you wrote in the fanfic. "directly insult the creator" my comment about how stupid you are had nothing to do with the fanfic or you being a creator. It was plain you not understanding a basic sentence. Don't try to twist it as if I insulted you over your fanfic. It's not my fault you are an idiot and don't understand a basic sentence without it having to be spelled out word by word like i'm talking to a 5 year old. And clearly you don't know how to take criticism.

SomeSpookyGuy:?? Bruh u r still not getting my point. Why trash talk in the first place? What benefit does it provide you? Sure, ur logic of the movies and songs is correct, but is it still proper to directly insult the creator? If u do think it is “necessary”, then why should you publicise it? Haven’t u heard of the saying “keep it to your self?” And y are u so mad? U started this, shouldn’t you be “calm and collective?” lol I really can’t understand people like you. I wont answer even if u sent another dumb reply. Goodbye idiot
toocareful
toocarefulLv14toocareful

I would drop it. Some authors dont like criticism and hide behind technology. You shouldnt stoop to the level of a guy who deletes reviews. I mean the kid doesnt understand that reviews dont have to be nice or constructive but are to inform others, like how you realized the story sucks by reading my review

BrabbitX:i called you an idiot for not understand what i meant when i said thats its good for both of us after you replied to my comment with the "good for you" You are making it sound as if I insulted you because of what you wrote in the fanfic. "directly insult the creator" my comment about how stupid you are had nothing to do with the fanfic or you being a creator. It was plain you not understanding a basic sentence. Don't try to twist it as if I insulted you over your fanfic. It's not my fault you are an idiot and don't understand a basic sentence without it having to be spelled out word by word like i'm talking to a 5 year old. And clearly you don't know how to take criticism.
Delfreed
DelfreedLv3Delfreed

I will answer all your replies that you made in your review (I apologize in advance for the google translate): -To begin with your review is correct and makes sense, myself who has not yet watched this fanfiction by seeing this review, I can give myself a small picture of how this fanfic can be. -Then your first reply, you were also right about not deleting negative reviews, but i don't agree to keep hate reviews, although it shows they didn't like the story this makes no sense to be kept here, I mean by that these hate reviews usually make no sense and pollute the mood of reviews. The aim of the critics is to give their opinion on the novel and to demonstrate by example why you didn't like it, it can help people like me who haven't seen this fanfiction to get started or not, however hateful reviews usually only show insults and spitting words on the work of an author who does his best for his pleasure. This can affect the author psychologically and make him drop his fanfiction because indirectly he will tell himself that his novel is bad when it can be very good. For example the reviews of BrabbitX, here his opinion makes no sense since he has not read the fanfiction, and he allows himself to insult the author of stupid, moron and idiot just because this one did not keep the best characters. The author does what he wants, he does not need the advice of a capricious child who can only answer by starting sentences with "idiots". His first comment shows a gratuitous hatred when the author had only calmly answered yours, the author having understood that it was a hateful comment answered only with a "Good for you" and the child did not like it and continued to discharge his hatred. this is a hateful comment in my opinion. -For your second reply, I totally agree with you for the difference of opinion but as i implied previously, hateful comments contain no opinion, only free hate. -And finally your third and last reply, it is true that some authors do not appreciate negative reviews, but the author does not deserve that you lower him to a certain "level" just because he removes hateful criticism. the fact that the author kept your 3-star review shows that in my opinion he appreciated your review and accepted it and shows that it does not remove negative reviews well enough explained like yours. Of course all this is only my opinion and I hope you took it into consideration, after all we forge our opinion in relation to the opinions of others. I apologize for taking your time and I hope my reply with google translate is quite readable and will be able to help you.

toocareful:I would drop it. Some authors dont like criticism and hide behind technology. You shouldnt stoop to the level of a guy who deletes reviews. I mean the kid doesnt understand that reviews dont have to be nice or constructive but are to inform others, like how you realized the story sucks by reading my review
toocareful
toocarefulLv14toocareful

The "level" I was talking about is when people try to get in a last word to try and sound mature, smart, etc. I mean the author didnt even need to say "good for you" but decided too. tbh hateful words arent even a big issue. When youre online you gotta have certain expectations of people due to their anonymity. And if people get hurt because of verbal comments then its not their thing. They dont know you and you dont know them, you put your work out there not yourself, and it online not even in person. Overall people who get butthurt over reviews shouldn't be writing(a little extreme)

Delfreed
DelfreedLv3Delfreed

It's true that trying to have the last word is childish it's also true that the author should have left the BrabbitX comment unanswered, or even erase his message that didn't help your review on this fanfiction. You are right, these hateful comments are to be expected all over the internet. But imagine here BrabbitX, it's only him currently present on this review, but let's imagine that the author didn't delete any hateful comments, how much of hateful person without concrete opinion on this fanfiction would have arrived to rain their hatred? 5? 10? or more? This is where i was referring to about the possibility that an author will drop his fanfic because of this hatred. From our point of view as a reader, we might believe that it is nothing and that the author is frail of mind, but in reality almost everyone deep down either without necessarily realizing it wants to be recognized for their work. See it this way, imagine that you do a job like a person who cleans in a company, and that every evening one or more guy you don't know who works everyday in the rooms that you clean spits on you and your work, you won't really like it and you might even think of quit your job if the boss doesn't care, here it's more or less the same and there is no boss. So I still sincerely believe that the author is currently doing the right choice in erasing hateful comments, whether it's mentally for him or for passers-by who wonder if this fanfiction is to their tastes. I understand your point of view, some people do a job while ignoring the atmosphere in their company, people who only want his money at the end of the month and doesn't care if his work is recognized, it shows that people are different. So here there are authors sensitive to all this and other not, in truth neither you nor me are wrong.

toocareful:The "level" I was talking about is when people try to get in a last word to try and sound mature, smart, etc. I mean the author didnt even need to say "good for you" but decided too. tbh hateful words arent even a big issue. When youre online you gotta have certain expectations of people due to their anonymity. And if people get hurt because of verbal comments then its not their thing. They dont know you and you dont know them, you put your work out there not yourself, and it online not even in person. Overall people who get butthurt over reviews shouldn't be writing(a little extreme)
kagee_kao
kagee_kaoLv2kagee_kao

Of course, with do you think author is doing?

toocareful:Well whatever. When people put stuff out, there is always going to be a difference in opinion and sometimes you just have to expect them to be harsh and roll with the punches.