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DarthVegito
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2020-08-25 09:34

Just dumb. he wants to be superman so hes put into a sick body then randomly he goes into a coma and 9months later hes superman. Just a terrible start to a story. not good

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Prolist_Stickz
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Thank you for the feedback πŸ‘πŸ‘ I’m kinda learning as I go on so I can completely understand your dislike of the introduction but I can promise,I’ll try hard to make a better overall story in the future.πŸ‘

DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10

Superman becomes a trainee so i would re rate this to a 1/5 but not gonna bother since im dropping this

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